while conscious
i often think
why do i wake?
when i am free
in my dreams
even my worst nightmares
cant compare to reality
and its hateful embrace
i often dream
to escape from whats real
because my mind cant even think
anything worse then what i see
with my own two eyes
when i am free
in my dreams
not a care in the world
i am free from routine
and the criticism
of those ignorant
so why should i stay?
when freedom is one shot away
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ReplyDeleteI love dreams. lucid especially
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ReplyDeletenice one
ReplyDeleteDreaming will set you free, it's when you're awake that you're in prison.
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Pretty well written
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ReplyDeletei do spoken word poetry, you can check it out here: http://www.youtube.com/user/cyspy?feature=mhum#g/c/A9C1A6482D7AF628
or on my blog.
Very well written :)
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ReplyDeleteVery nice. I used to write poetry.
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ReplyDeleteA very good poem, really liked it. Touching as Caroline said. Good work.
ReplyDeleteReally eye-opening
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ReplyDeletenice and deep poem
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